It was a cold and spitting day as I was running. I had numb feet, even though the sun was trying to shine. I felt nervous as I jogged along with my feet getting covered in mud. After the race I felt dizzy and tired. I had a stitch, but I just kept on running anyway. When I was near to the finish line I felt proud, as I had achieved my goal and come 5th. (Even though my sister - Mary had beaten me.)
Hi Jessica,
ReplyDeleteWell done of coming 5th place Jessica. We had to run so far and it was a cold day. I couldn't wait to run in the rain. Keep up the great work.
Vivienne
HI Jessica you are very talented and you are really awesome because you ask your self things to achive your goal best wishes
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Hi my name is Elad, and i think what you wrote is amazing!!! i would feel really happy and proud if i came in 5th.
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