This is a record of my learning during my time at Pt. England School.
Thursday, October 14, 2010
JESSICA HONEY BEE STORY
Very quickly the bee was buzzing and spinning and it appeared out of control, as it flew from one flower to the next. As the bee zigzagged and dodged it was flitting his wings. On top of the flower, the bee collects precious nectar too make honey.
Great paragraph about a bee, Jessica! I like how you've added detail by using descriptive words like 'dodged and zigzagged'. You are very clever, I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
Hello Jessica I really like your honey bee story. I could really see the bee in my mind.
ReplyDeleteGreat paragraph about a bee, Jessica! I like how you've added detail by using descriptive words like 'dodged and zigzagged'. You are very clever, I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteFrom Miss Lavakula