Today me and my big sister is going shopping for food for our cupboard.We first caught the taxi to the bank and then walked to the lotto shop to cheek my mums ticket my mum just luckily won $45-dollars.My mum was happy she walked out and said yes I think this is my lucky day today and I said yea right.And then we started walking to Pakin save I got the trolley and started pushing it inside.I was walking around telling my mum what are we getting I got anything I wanted.I asked my mum if I can buy a chocolate and she said yes you can get anything you want I only picked a drink and a chocolate and chips it taste nice.My mum was just shopping for our cupboard.We bought nice food any ways.
Hello Jessica! You've written a great description of your time out shopping. I especially like your picture of my favourite section of the supermarket - the chocolate isle! Next time you could use some smaller sentences to chop it up a bit and make your great description even better. Well done.
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I wish I had chocolate every day.
DON"T EAT THAT MUCH CHOCOLATE.