Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Bio poem

Line 1: Jessica
Line 2: Kind,happy,sporty,hard worker.
Line 3: Daughter of Linda Tagaloa and sister of Rose,Natasha,Michelle and Mary.
 Line 4: Sports,food.
 Line 5: happy when I play with the dog.
 Line 6: Has been to Australia and Hamilton just once.
 Line 7: Drink plenty of water.
Line 8: Rat,Snake and massive spiders ghost.
 Line 9: Who would like to see Jesus someday.
Line10: Resident of Auckland. Line
 11: Ikimata

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Jessica,
    Your story is so amazing it almost blew me away while I was reading it. Theres just a few mistakes that you need to fix in line 5 which is you need a capital letter. I can't wait until you post some more poems about your self.

    Keep up the amazing work :)

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